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小老虎练习写作

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I imagine walking into a deciduous forest in the early cloudy afternoon in mid-spring. I smelled fresh air from the leaves and the ground was a little wet. The tree leaves are green and big logs have fallen to the ground. Suddenly, I saw a bear from the far distance; it’s a fair sized bear with black fur. It took slow steps looking at the ground. I was paralyzed at the moment, then the beard walked away. I waited for a few minutes until no sign of the bear, then I felt much relieved.

I kept walking until I saw a small ancient key buried under leaves and dirt. I slid the key into my pocket. I kept walking on the small trail until there was a dead end. Then I saw a big pond, the water in the pond was so clean that it looks like came from a spring. Nearby was a tree stump with a cup on it. I picked it up and it was an old white cup with a few cracks but still rather clean.

I carried on walking wishing I could’ve brought my camera until the forest ended and there was a wide field with no trees but very tall wild grass stretched around. I stomped my way through the grass until I saw a big house in the middle of the field. I saw no movement in the windows, so I went in. I explored the house, still no sign of people, I was beginning to think that it was an abandoned house. When I stepped outside, I found something was not right. I remembered seeing the window closed, but now it’s open. I was completely terrified right now.


过大年,观花灯今年一月二十六号,我们一家都去了中国过春节。 我们去广州看爷爷和奶奶。广州的街道挂满灯笼。妈妈和爸爸带我去观花灯,花灯有各种各样的形状,主要是花的形状。当晚爷爷和奶奶做了很好吃的饭菜给我们,好吃极了!晚上,我们去房顶看美丽的焰火。春节主要的颜色是红色。

春节共有十五天,大年初二我们飞去了外婆和外公的家。外婆外公带着我们和我们的亲戚去餐馆里吃各种各样的菜,我们在一个很大的房间吃。菜和饭都超级好吃!吃得肚子饱饱的。过了几天舅舅和舅妈买了超级大的烟花给我!烟花有各种颜色,又漂亮又响亮。

春节期间,我拿到了很多红包。春节的最后一天是一个特别的日子,叫元宵节。元宵节要包汤圆,所以外婆外公做了很多汤圆给我们吃,有各种各样的味道。晚上,我们去外面唱歌和看娱乐节目。我觉得中国节日相比加拿大更精彩!!!

(英文8年级,中文5年级)

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  1. 评论 | 2011年11月9日 11:49

    英文的俺不懂,中文的真不错啊。

    先赞一下。你家小老虎使用电脑打字,还是自己写的?

  2. 评论 | 2011年11月9日 12:03

    老虎的中文真不错

  3. 评论 | 2011年11月9日 12:18

    百合精心培育的人才,真的不错!

  4. 评论 | 2011年11月9日 12:21

    赞,赞你儿子也赞儿子妈妈, 不看看是谁的后代,呵呵。。。

  5. 评论 | 2011年11月9日 23:18

    中英文都比我强多了,向小家伙学习。

  6. 评论 | 2011年11月10日 10:14

    先是被大黑熊吓得动弹不得,后又为那弃屋鬼窗而后怕。小老虎的想象力了得!学习了两个词:deciduous,stomp。 谢谢小老虎!:D

  7. 评论 | 2011年11月23日 23:46

    百合家的孩子都英文8年级啦? 中文也很棒,以后看金庸小说没问题了,,,那可是俺对孩子的梦想啊!

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