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Warped Into Super Mario

CH.1 (Jack’s perspective of Reality life)

As summer break began, l was happy that there was no more school. School is like the place of boredom. Everyday I wake up at 7:30am for school (which I have trouble with) and get to school at 7:50. I wish I could just forget about school and sleep, but my mom yanks me out of my bed. When getting to school, my locker mate piles up his clothes in my locker (I’ve gotten used to it), so every time I open it, his clothes falls on me! Well now that is over, I can finally sleep in and play basketball or play video games with my friends on my Wii or xbox 360.

CH.2 (Jack’s parents and his sister)

A week later, my parents said they have to go to this special parent interview meeting for this rich job. Dad told me they will be in Washington D.C for about 2 to 3 weeks until they comeback. So they left us in charge of the house, and meant “us” meant my sister Paige Robinson. Paige is a 13 years old teenage girl, only 2 years younger than me. She always gets good grades and boys always like her. I only have average grades. I am really strong when it comes to sports, especially basketball. I’m not only athletic for sports; I am also really strong that I could take down anyone. One time the meanest guy in my school challenged me to a fight and beat him ‘till he was down. That’s how people knew me, and my sister always calls me Jackie Chan because of that incident, my name was actually Jack Robinson.

CH.3 (Bye-Bye Mom & Dad)

“We’re going!” dad told us while putting on his shoes, 

“Make sure to take care of our house!” said mom, 

“We will!” Jack and Paige both said.

As they closed the door, Jack sensed freedom. He could now eat junk food whenever he want!  

“I’ll be upstairs on Facebook,” Paige said while making her way upstairs.  Jack got the couch and the big flat screen TV to himself, and he felt happy..

CH.4 (Living without Parents)

Three days had past.

“Hmmm, How are mom & dad doing?” Jack wondered to himself.

“They must be doing fine!” Jack thought.

            Jack and his sister have been living off Kraft Dinner for three days, their mom & dad does not cook for them very often so they usually make their own meals (it’s actually quite easy). His sister’s daily routine is going to the mall with her friends, text, and chat on Facebook and sometimes hanging over at her friend’s house. Jack’s daily routine would be playing videogames and hanging out at his friends place.

CH.5 (Discovery of a prototype video game)

The fourth day had had come. It was 11:00 and Jack had just finished his cereal. Just as Jack was about to lie down on the couch, the telephone rang; Jack picked it up, his friend Paul (same age as Jack) was on the phone, he said he had a really old videogame for the Gamecube,

            “Yeah,” Paul said “I found it in my grandpa’s chest of old things.”

“It’s a super Mario game called super Mario unknown.”

            “Why is it called the ‘unknown’?” Jack asked,

“I don’t know but it seems that this is a prototype and hasn’t been released yet “

“WOW,” Jack said unbelievably. “How’d your grandpa get this?”

“I have no idea how but can your Wii play a Nintendo Gamecube disc?”

“Yeah, it should be” Jack answered.

“Great!” Paul said excitedly, “I’m coming over to your house to try it!”

“And call Alan too!” then he hung up.

Alan was also jack’s best friend, only 1 year younger than Jack & Paul. I still wondered how did a cancelled prototype game on the Gamecube ended up at Paul’s house.

CH.6 (Warped into super Mario)

By the time they arrived, Jack had the Wii set up for Paul’s ‘unknown’ Super Mario game.

            “I got the disc!!” Paul said eagerly.

            “Great” Jack said.

When Alan just walked into Jack’s house, Jack inserted the Gamecube disc into his Wii. The moment Jack inserted it, his Wii flashed red. “Weird, I remember the Wii flashing blue instead of red,” Jack was afraid that his Wii might crash. Then it turned blue and loaded the disc. They waited and waited until it showed only the word ‘unknown’.

            “I guess this is it” Paul said.

            “Yep” Jack replied.

            “So what are you waiting for?” Alan said impatiently,

            “Lets play!”

So Jack pressed start and suddenly the TV jumped up, then crashed down on the table and settled.

“Okay, what is happening!” Jack yelled.

Then the TV screen rippled like water ripple.

“Whoa!” we all yelled in awe.

Suddenly jack’s sister Paige popped out and yelled, “what the hell is going on here!!”

            “I am trying to concentrate on texting with my friend and all I hear is crashing noises and you guys yelling!”

Suddenly Paige noticed the TV screen rippling like ripples in water.

            “Whoa!” she said in awe, “Now what is really going on here?”

“Jack, did you just break our new TV!?” she said as if she had favourite shows that she loved to watch.

            “Well it seems that it’s not broken but has a rippled effect like ripples in a water” Jack said as if he were a scientist. “It’s like a portal you can go through.”

            “That’s impossible!” Alan argued.

            “Well there’s only one way to find out.” Jack was going to throw his hand into the screen.

            “I’d laugh if he punched his TV and broke it,” Alan whispered to Paul.

When at that moment Jack tried to throw his hand into the screen, it went into the screen.

            “OMG,” they all said with their jaws all open.

Jack put his0 head in there and saw an entire surface of many platforms, “wow!!” Jack said, “I could actually see this- Ahh!!!” and then he fell into the TV into the Super Mario world of unknown.

            “Someone go in and get him out!!” Paige yelled, “Come on, we’ll all go into the TV and get him out!”

            “Are you out of your mind!!” Paul protested, “I ain’t going in there!!”

            “Well we are!!” she said fearlessly and grabbed Paul and Alan’s hand and lunged into the TV. They found themselves falling in mid-air, landing on a big trampoline and landed on a platform.

            “WOW!!!” Paige said, “This is amazing!!”

            “I know, right?” Paul replied.

            “Where are we?” asked Alan,

            “The world of Super Mario!” Paul answered.

            “How are we going to get out?” Alan asked panicky, “and where is Jack?”

            “Over there” Paige yelled.

Jack was at the end of the platform trying to make a jump on a block.

            “Jack!!” we all shouted. He turned and ran to us and said “we need to get to that portal so we can return to the real world”. Jack pointed up to the virtual sky, which there was the portal.

            “How do you expect us to get up there!?” Alan argued.

            “That’s the problem” Jack replied.

            “Since we are in a video game, maybe we could have super powers!” Paige suggested.

            “That could be true,” Paul agreed. Therefore Paul tried to jump really high and he springed into the sky almost close to reaching the portal.

            “It’s no use,” Jack declared, “lets just advance forward until we find another portal”. And so they advanced in search of another portal.

Ch.7 (The adventure begins)

They walked and jumped through obstacles until they approached these enemy-like mushrooms that attacks them.

            “I know Super Mario very well, and that mushroom-like enemy is called a Goomba,” Paul blurted out.

            “How do you kill it?” Jack asked while backing away.

            “Simple,” Paul replied. “You just jump on them and they die”.

            “Cool!!” Alan added.

They advanced on killing Goombas and any other enemy that can to be jumped on. They advanced until the land turned to snow and a frozen lake was upon them.

            “How do we get across?” asked Paige.

            “There should be some pair of skates nearby so we can skate across” Paul replied. (Paul knew a lot about when it comes to Super Mario). The skates were placed on a tree stump, and it was equally enough. They finished putting on their skates on and started gliding on the ice.

            “Weee!!” Paige hollered. “This is fun!!”

            “I know, right?” Paul replied.

            “I’m not good at skating” Alan said as he fell.

            “Here I’ll help you” Paige said as she lifted him off the ground.

She and Alan skated together hand by hand.

“I’m actually skating!” Alan thought, “and I’m holding hands with paige!”

Alan secretly had a little crush on Paige even though Paige was a year younger than him.

            “Look out!” Jack warned everyone, “There are Goombas on the ice!”

“How do we take them out Paul?” asked Jack.

            ” It’s even simpler on ice, you just ignore them”, “but if they come at you, they just die from your touch because the force of skating will knock them out!”

            “Thanks!” Jack shouted.

As they all made it to the end of the lake, they take off their skating shoes and advanced forward. The snow ended and right over there was a little wooden cottage.

            “Are you thinking what I’m thinking?” Paul asked everyone.

            “Nope” Alan said

            “That we should stay in that cottage for awhile?” Jack suggested.

            “Yep, we should stay there until we get enough energy and enough

Shut eye” Paul answered. “We gotta prepare for the Final Boss”

            “What Final Boss?” jack questioned suspiciously.

            “Yeah, what?” Alan blurted out.

“           “Every Super Mario game has a final Boss to defeat, like Bowser”

            “Why didn’t you tell us that in the first place?” Paige asked.

            “Yeah, why? Alan blurted out again.”

“Well I didn’t tell because I didn’t want you guys to panic, I wanted you guys to enjoy this game that has come alive” Paul said calmly. “Sorry if I hadn’t told you”.

“It’s okay,” Alan apologized.

“Well let’s get in that cottage for now,” insisted Jack.

CH.8 (Cottage of 1-up mushrooms)

In that cottage were eight 1-up mushrooms, and of course, a bathroom.

1-up mushrooms are edible and increase your life points by one.

            “What is that?” asked Paige.

            “1-up mushrooms,” Paul responded. “They should be edible and they increase your life points by one”

            “How much life points do we start at?” asked Jack.

            “Three,” Paul replied. “But if your three lives are gone, then bye-bye you”.

            “Well we better not die!” Alan added.

            “I’m going to the bathroom” Paul said. “It’s right around this corner if you need to go”

When Paul came back, the 1-up mushrooms were toasted by the fireplace, ready to be eaten.

            “Well,” added Jack. “Lets start our prayers”: *Jack starts the prayer*, “-and thank you father for giving us these juicy, edible, and delicious 1-up mushrooms, Amen”. Everyone toke a bite of it.

            “It’s okay… I guess,” Paige said.

            “Okay it might give out a little foul stench but it gives us extra life points” Paul clarified. Everyone had two 1-up mushrooms. Once they were done eating, they all sat beside the fireplace and talked about their reality life and soon went to sleep.

CH.9 (The Dream)

Paul suddenly was in the middle of nowhere, then a big booming sound went to his ears, it came bigger, than bigger, than bigger until this big, fiery red, spiky monster came out. His friends just stood there at the opposite side of me, doing nothing. Paul tried to shout, “Get out of the way!!” but somehow he couldn’t talk. The monster blew gigantic flames to my friends, still did nothing. Why? Why wouldn’t they move? When his friends were at their last lives, the monster stomped on them, leaving them dissolving into dust. “NOOOO!!!!” Paul cried. Then the monster turned to Paul, Paul had no idea how to defend myself until he saw this fair size of a little dinosaur, Paul remembered that guy, he was Yoshi but a little different, Paul climbed on him and threw turtle shells at the monster until he was paralyzed and dissolved into dust. Then it only left one thing, his collar that says “Xorowser”.

CH.10 (Last move)

It was daytime; Paul quickly woke up, still remembering that dream, that Yoshi-like creature, that monster’s collar that says “Xorowser”.

            “Let’s head outside,” Jack said. We started on our adventure again, advancing, and taking out enemies that we knew. Untill this Veuns fly-trap plant swatted at us, good thing we dogged.

            “Uh Paul, what is that?” Jack asked.

            “It’s called a Piranha plant” Paul replied. “You can defeat them by jumping on them or spinning”.

            Uh, what’s spinning?” Alan asked.

            “You haven’t taught us that yet,” Paige added.

            “Try spinning 360°,” Paul insisted. “Then you can knock out any minor enemy”. They all tried to but none got it right except Jack, he spinned and twirled 360° high up in the air like a jumping ballerina. They copied Jack and eventually got the hang of it. They defeated every Piranha plant.

            “Good job everyone!” Jack affirmed.

CH.11 (The green pipe)

It was afternoon, we hit a dead end but we found this green portal thing that leads to another place.

            “Okay, lets not panic even though we hit a dead end,” Alan said trying to calm them.

            “There should be a green pipe around here…” Paul said to himself.

            “What green pipe?” Paige asked.

            “I should teach you guys more often, a green pipe (or warp pipe) is a piece of green pipe that’s connected to the ground which would transport you to another place,” Paul explained. “Chances are this could be the place we will be defeating the boss”.

            “We better get ready,” Jack told us.

            “Yeah,” Paul replied, still remembering the dream. We were about to risk going through the green pipe ‘till Paul yelled, “wait!”

            “What!?” they all said impatiently.

            “I think I have something that could help us, more special powers.”

            “I thought you taught us everything,” Alan said.

            “It’s not something you can teach, it’s a special perk.” “See look.” He picked up eight flowers with a cotton top, eight rocky mushrooms, eight red flowers, eight white mushrooms, and found four shiny rainbow stars.

            “They all have special powers if you are holding them” paul said. “The flower with a cotton top makes you float on a cloud, the red flower can make you breath out fireballs, white mushroom turns you invisible, and rainbow star make you invincible.” “You activate anyone of them by shaking it, then spin 360°, the time limit for each perk is three minutes.”

            “Everyone got it?” Paul asked

            “Yep,” they all said.

            “Got it in my head,” Jack said. And they jumped in the green pipe.

CH.12 (The Boss)

They were transported into a world full of lava seas, and there in the center of a island was the Boss Xorowser.

            “Man! This looks hard,” Paige said as if giving up.

            “Don’t worry sister,” Jack said. “I’ve planned out where we start.”

They all lunged forward and jumped enemies, spinning, twirling untill they dissolved.

            “Be careful of the lava!” Jack said to his fellow friends. They all ended up in a tight spot.

            “We’ll have to split in half,” Jack shouted. So we all split in half, fighting enemies and monsters until we have all reached in the island of the Boss.

The Boss “Xorowser” did not look happy.

            “Everyone split up and use their special powers!!” Paul yelled.

Jack used his could perk and flew everywhere then activated his fiery breath perk and threw fireballs at Xorowser. Xorowser blew flames everywhere but no one was harmed. Paige used her invisible perk and fireball perk as she turned invisible and shot fireballs at Xorowser. Alan on the other hand took every perk and activated it; it did a lot of damage. Jack saw Xorowser was going to stomp on Paul,

“Watch out Paul!!” Jack hollered but it was no use, paul lost a life but still got four. Xorowser got less powerful.

“Yes!” said Alan, it’s working! Xorowser was going to fall down. But Alan saw his other friends down there, “Oh, man!” he said to himself, there going to get squashed!! Indeed they got squashed. Alan was worried to tears if they still had a life left. They did. Jack, Paul, and Paige all reappeared.

“We did it!!!” Jack said victoriously.

“Yeah!!!” they all shouted. As Xorowser dissolved to dust, everything that was lava turned to water, everything that was solid ground turned to grass. Everything turned peaceful.

CH.13 (Portal unlocked)

Everyone hugged each other and from that moment they felt accomplished, they forgot about the portal.

“What about the portal?” Paige reminded

“Oh, yeah!!” Paul said as if he had forgotten everything. “Well it should eventually pop up minutes later.”

So we waited, and chatted until this mysterious orange light came from the virtual sky and the portal fell through the orange light.

“Here it is,” said Paul.

“Ugh! I am so tired from jumping and spinning” added Paige. One by one we crawled into the portal.

“Thanks man for giving us help” Jack said to paul.

“No problem, besides I’m your best friend I can help you anytime.” Then Jack crawled in

“I do have to say this was the most fun and exciting thing I have ever experienced.” Alan said to Paul.

“You bet it was!” Paul replied as Alan crawled in the portal. When everyone was gone, Paul had some fun time in this Super Mario world.

“Look at him go crazy,” Jack said as they watched Paul in the TV.

“Why is he riding that dinosaur-like creature?” Paige asked

“I don’t know but I think I should call him back in”

            “Okay now he is rolling in the virtual grass,” Alan added

            “Paul! Come back in to the real world!” Jack shouted to Paul.

            “I’m coming!!” Paul replied. Soon he was out of the video game and was back home at Jack’s house.

            “I really miss that super Mario adventure we had,” Paul said.

            “We all did,” Jack replied.

            “It’s been two days since we were gone,” Paige mentioned. “What about you two, won’t your parents be worried about you?”

            “My parents are on vacation without me,” Paul replied.

            “I just leave a voice mail of me saying I am at a sleep over at Jack’s house, they always trust you,” Alan replied.

            “Well we two have to get home now,” Paul said.

            “Wait!” Jack said, “don’t you need your disc?” Jack asked Paul.

“           “You keep it until we want to start another adventure!” Paul said as he went outside

See ya!” Alan & Paul said as they waved goodbye.

            “I think you were very brave in that video game,” jack said to his sister.

            “I was just so curious,” Paige replied.

            “And you were very brave too,” Paige said to his brother. Paige browsed her phone, about 10 calls and 60 Facebook chats she had missed.

            “Oh, boy,” she said as she yawned. “I’ll be upstairs on Facebook!”

Guess everything was back to normal, Jack hid that disc before his parents find out. It was 4:50pm and Jack was so tired that he felt asleep.

(p.s. 为了完成这个故事,小老虎昨天一直写到夜里11:30,当娘的心疼啊!)       

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  1. 评论 | 2011年12月16日 11:26

    哈哈,小老虎作文,大老虎心疼,有其母必有其子,将来一定是文曲官呀! :-)

  2. 评论 | 2011年12月20日 11:54

    俺不看小说滴,更别说英文小说了。但好奇害死人(不给pay钱哪),看了小老虎的小说,我彻底晕!有哈利波特的风格,想象力超群。 不知小老虎同龄人的英文水平,但俺觉得他应该是佼佼者,也一定是个超级阅读爱好者。

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