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雅思写作行云流水连贯方能摘高分

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Coherence 是雅思大作文的评分标准之一,即文章的连贯性。连贯的语言可以使文章读起来如行云流水,给人一气呵成之感。但是,在写作时,很多考生比较缺乏文章连贯的意识,或缺少使得语言表达连贯的方法,导致雅思大作文失分。鉴于此,朗阁海外考试研究中心写作组的专家将结合多年的考试及教学经验,给雅思考生们讲解一下如何增强段落内部的连贯性。

一、正确使用指代词

使用的指代词包括人称代词,物主代词和一些特定的词语。

使用人称代词或物主代词代替文章中重复出现的词

剑桥4 test4 task2范文中的句子:

But I think the solution to the problem lies with thefamilies, who need to be more aware of the future consequences of spoilingtheirchildren. If they could raise them to be considerate of others and to besocial, responsible individuals, the whole community would benefit.

使用特定的词语来指代某一类事物

这些词包括one, that, those, so, this, notdo的各种形式。同时,被替代的可以是名词、动词,也可以是句子。

①替代名词(one, that, those来替代某个名词)

剑桥7 test B task2范文中的句子:

I agree with the view that stars in the entertainmentbusiness are usually over paid. However, it is also true that it is only thosewho reach the very top of their profession who can get these huge salary.

②替代动词(do的各种形式来代替前面提到的动词)

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